"Dad! you are so..." I grumbled. "What?" my dad asked and slapped me. Overcome with anger, I ran out of the door angrily. As soon as I did that, I knew I had made a mistake. I still did not turn back, I was fuming mad. Why did I make such mistake? It was 9.30pm at night. the streets were deserted. As I hurried owards my friend's house, I had creepy feeling of being followed... I stopped for a brief second. From the corner of my eye, I spotted a figure in black closing in on me. He advanced on me slowly and deliberately. I spun around the flee. I ran as fast as my legs could carry me, But kidnapper was faster. He pounced on me, a satisfied and grin lingering on his lips.
Knowing that I could not escape, i stopped squirming as he slapped a smelly wet cloth over my face. A dreadful pungent smell invaded my nostrils. My limbs went weak and I blacked out.
When I came to, I was gagged and bound. I caught a glimpse of my adbuctor as my eyes adjusted to darkness. He was looking at me. "So lad, your parents will pay for this!" I took a closer look at him. Could it be? Oh! it was my uncle stocky! He had fought with Dad and must have wanted to revenge! As he went out to get tea, he called, "Good bye Charlie! Hope you have a nice time!"
As soon as he was out, I put my hands to my pocket and get a twig I had kept with me all the while, I scratched at the rope and it came off slowly. I tugged at my rope and it come off. I took off my gag and tiptoed out. The coast was clear. i gained courage and ran towards a public telephone and punched in the numbers. Soon, the sirens were music to my ears.
At home, I only realised how important families were.
By School Composition Singapore Primary 5 - 2010
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ReplyDeleteNice but too short. No offence. Im from Punggol Primary School and in the P5 top class an theres quite a number of good writers here :3
ReplyDeleteI'm a primany 5 student and i don't believe this is P5 standard
ReplyDeleteIt is too short(No Offense):(
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DeleteIm sorry but this composition is to short but thank you for all the good words and phrases ^^
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ReplyDeleteQuite short.... but okay okay
ReplyDeleteQuite short.... but okay okay
ReplyDeletenice story though.
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ReplyDeleteThe story is suitable for a comprehension passage. It is attractive to read but it is a bit too short.
ReplyDeleteThe story is suitable for a comprehension passage. It is attractive to read but it is a bit too short.
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ReplyDeleteawesome very good to learn my daughter got 280 for compo
ReplyDeleteTooooopooooooooooo short
ReplyDeleteAnd juicy
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