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Saturday, October 24, 2009

Creative Writing - DROWNING - Picture Composition

"Mum! John asked if I could go fishing with him. Can I go? I looked up. It was my brother, Leo. "Sure! behave yourself!" Mum replied. Leo looked as happy as a dog with two tails. "Don't forget the pail". I told him careless Leo was always forgetting things.

As Leo walked ahead, he met John. "Oh! I thought you wanted to meet at the park!" "Nevermind!" John grinned. As thy continued walking, Leo and John chatted about games and other things. Soon, they reached the path leaading to the lake. "You brought your pail right?" John asked. "Check!" Leo grinned. "Your fishing net? " Leo asked. "Check!" come the immediate reply.

At the end of the path, a sign with the word "DANGER" written on it, was stuck into the mud. The boys, cheeky as usual, ignored the sign and carried on walking. When they reached lake. John stood near the edge of the lake. A fish was slowly swimming towards him. "Becareful!! This is a 10 meters deep lake" cautioned Leo. Just as his words were lettered, John slipped and fell into the lake. Oh no! "Leo thought. he groaned, "Leo, you can't swim.

Neither can John!" Leo looked at John. His arms were failing wildky in the air. Suddenly John felt a sharp pull in his legs. He yelped out, but his cries were muffled by the wind. John went sd white as a sheet as he bobbled up and down trashing about. He remembered he had his handphone in his pocket. John then threw the handphone to leo. "Quick! call someone! Anyone!" he shouted. Leo called me "Sis! Come! Quick!" Leo shouted "what happened?" I asked. "John is drowning!" he shouted. "Coming!" I replied. "Hurry up!" Then, the phone went dead. I shouted for dad and mum to follow; thenm we ran to the lake. I looked in horror. Where was John?

"he....he.... drowned!" Leo shouted. Dad jumped into search for John. The cold murky water surged into Dad's ears and mouth. Dad came up, then disappeared underwater again. Seconds later, he surfaced with John safe in his hands. He swam quickly and lowered John gently on the ground. When John's eyes fluttered open, he seemed dazed. Dad sighed. Dad told us later, that he had to swim with the powerful strokes. It was very difficult as the water was murky.

Once bitten twice shy, John decided not to go too dose to the edge of the lake again.

By School Composition Singapore Primary 4 - 2009

Tuesday, October 13, 2009

Essay Writing Sample- Animal Abuse

"Meow...Meow" Susan stood very still. Somewhere earby, a cat was crying pitifully. She looked around, trying to see where it was.

"Hey you! take that!" A boy's voice were got her attention. She walked towards a hedge and looked behind it. There was a group of boys abusing a little kitten. The boys were throwing sticks at the kitten. The kitten let out a yelp of pain. Cowering the kitten attemped to escape. The kitten want on a frenzy when one of the boys pulled its tail. Susan could not take it any longer and shouted, "Stop it!!!" You are just another foolish little girl..." one of the boys jeered. " I'm reporting" Susan muttered as she turned away. Just then, she bumped into a policeman. She quickly told the policeman what she had seen and he went investigate.

The boys stood there, frozen to the spot. They turned tail and fled for dear life. Susan, on the other hand was praised. Susan picked the kitten up and brought it hime to nurse it back to health. From then, on the kitten, now named Tabby became Susan's best friend.

By School Composition Singapore Primary 4 - 2009

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

SENTENCES.—PARTS OF SPEECH.—ELEMENTS OF THE SENTENCE.—PHRASES AND CLAUSES

PRACTICAL GRAMMAR AND COMPOSITION


CHAPTER I
SENTENCES.—PARTS OF SPEECH.—ELEMENTS OF THE SENTENCE.—PHRASES AND CLAUSES

1. In thinking we arrange and associate ideas and objects together. Words are the symbols of ideas or objects. A Sentence is a group of words that expresses a single complete thought.

2. Sentences are of four kinds:

1. Declarative; a sentence that tells or declares something; as, That book is mine.

2. Imperative; a sentence that expresses a command; as, Bring me that book.

3. Interrogative; a sentence that asks a question; as, Is that book mine?

4. Exclamatory; a declarative, imperative, or interrogative sentence that expresses violent emotion, such as terror, surprise, or anger; as, You shall take that book! or, Can that book be mine?

3. Parts of Speech. Words have different uses in sentences. According to their uses, words are divided into classes called Parts of Speech. The parts of speech are as follows:

1. Noun; a word used as the name of something; as, man, box, Pittsburgh, Harry, silence, justice.

Page 2 2. Pronoun; a word used instead of a noun; as, I, he, it, that.

Nouns, pronouns, or groups of words that are used as nouns or pronouns, are called by the general term, Substantives.

3. Adjective; a word used to limit or qualify the meaning of a noun or a pronoun; as, good, five, tall, many.

The words a, an, and the are words used to modify nouns or pronouns. They are adjectives, but are usually called Articles.

4. Verb; a word used to state something about some person or thing; as, do, see, think, make.

5. Adverb; a word used to modify the meaning of a verb, an adjective, or another adverb; as, very, slowly, clearly, often.

6. Preposition; a word used to join a substantive, as a modifier, to some other preceding word, and to show the relation of the substantive to that word; as, by, in, between, beyond.

7. Conjunction; a word used to connect words, phrases, clauses, and sentences; as, and, but, if, although, or.

8. Interjection; a word used to express surprise or emotion; as, Oh! Alas! Hurrah! Bah!

Sometimes a word adds nothing to the meaning of the sentence, but helps to fill out its form or sound, and serves as a device to alter its natural order. Such a word is called an Expletive. In the following sentence there is an expletive: There are no such books in print.

4. A sentence is made up of distinct parts or elements. The essential or Principal Elements are the Subject and the Predicate.

The Subject of a sentence is the part which mentions that about which something is said. The Predicate is the part which states that which is said about the subject. Man walks. In this sentence, man is the subject, and walks is the predicate.

Page 3 The subject may be simple or modified; that is, may consist of the subject alone, or of the subject with its modifiers. The same is true of the predicate. Thus, in the sentence, Man walks, there is a simple subject and a simple predicate. In the sentence, The good man walks very rapidly, there is a modified subject and a modified predicate.

There may be, also, more than one subject connected with the same predicate; as, The man and the woman walk. This is called a Compound Subject. A Compound Predicate consists of more than one predicate used with the same subject; as, The man both walks and runs.

5. Besides the principal elements in a sentence, there are Subordinate Elements. These are the Attribute Complement, the Object Complement, the Adjective Modifier, and the Adverbial Modifier.

Some verbs, to complete their sense, need to be followed by some other word or group of words. These words which "complement," or complete the meanings of verbs are called Complements.

The Attribute Complement completes the meaning of the verb by stating some class, condition, or attribute of the subject; as, My friend is a student, I am well, The man is good Student, well, and good complete the meanings of their respective verbs, by stating some class, condition, or attribute of the subjects of the verbs.

The attribute complement usually follows the verb be or its forms, is, are, was, will be, etc. The attribute complement is usually a noun, pronoun, or adjective, although it may be a phrase or clause fulfilling the function of any of these parts of speech. It must not be confused with an adverb or an adverbial modifier. In the sentence, He is there, there is an adverb, not an attribute complement.

The verb used with an attribute complement, because such verb joins the subject to its attribute, is called the Copula ("to couple") or Copulative Verb.

Page 4 Some verbs require an object to complete their meaning. This object is called the Object Complement. In the sentence, I carry a book, the object, book, is required to complete the meaning of the transitive verb carry; so, also in the sentences, I hold the horse, and I touch a desk, the objects horse and desk are necessary to complete the meanings of their respective verbs. These verbs that require objects to complete their meaning are called Transitive Verbs.

Adjective and Adverbial Modifiers may consist simply of adjectives and adverbs, or of phrases and clauses used as adjectives or adverbs.

6. A Phrase is a group of words that is used as a single part of speech and that does not contain a subject and a predicate.

A Prepositional Phrase, always used as either an adjective or an adverbial modifier, consists of a preposition with its object and the modifiers of the object; as, He lives in Pittsburg, Mr. Smith of this place is the manager of the mill, The letter is in the nearest desk.

There are also Verb-phrases. A Verb-phrase is a phrase that serves as a verb; as, I am coming, He shall be told, He ought to have been told.

7. A Clause is a group of words containing a subject and a predicate; as, The man that I saw was tall. The clause, that I saw, contains both a subject, I, and a predicate, saw. This clause, since it merely states something of minor importance in the sentence, is called the Subordinate Clause. The Principal Clause, the one making the most important assertion, is, The man was tall. Clauses may be used as adjectives, as adverbs, and as nouns. A clause used as a noun is called a Substantive Clause. Examine the following examples:

Adjective Clause: The book that I want is a history.
Adverbial Clause: He came when he had finished with the work.
Noun Clause as subject: That I am here is true.
Noun Clause as object: He said that I was mistaken.

Page 5 8. Sentences, as to their composition, are classified as follows:

Simple; a sentence consisting of a single statement; as, The man walks.

Complex; a sentence consisting of one principal clause and one or more subordinate clauses; as, The man that I saw is tall.

Compound; a sentence consisting of two or more clauses of equal importance connected by conjunctions expressed or understood; as, The man is tall and walks rapidly, and Watch the little things; they are important.

Exercise 1

In this and in all following exercises, be able to give the reason for everything you do and for every conclusion you reach. Only intelligent and reasoning work is worth while.

In the following list of sentences:

(1) Determine the part of speech of every word.

(2) Determine the unmodified subject and the unmodified predicate; and the modified subject and the modified predicate.

(3) Pick out every attribute complement and every object complement.

(4) Pick out every phrase and determine whether it is a prepositional phrase or a verb-phrase. If it is a prepositional phrase, determine whether it is used as an adjective or as an adverb.

(5) Determine the principal and the subordinate clauses. If they are subordinate clauses, determine whether they are used as nouns, adjectives, or adverbs.

(6) Classify every sentence as simple, complex, or compound.

Houses are built of wood, brick, stone, and other materials, and are constructed in various styles.
The path of glory leads but to the grave.
We gladly accepted the offer which he made.
I am nearly ready, and shall soon join you.
There are few men who do not try to be honest.
Page 6 Men may come, and men may go, but I go on forever.
He works hard, and rests little.
She is still no better, but we hope that there will be a change.
Let each speak for himself.
It was I who told him to go.
To live an honest life should be the aim of every one.
Who it really was no one knew, but all believed it to have been him.
In city and in country people think very differently.
To be or not to be, that is the question.
In truth, I think that I saw a brother of his in that place.
By a great effort he managed to make headway against the current.
Beyond this, I have nothing to say.
That we are never too old to learn is a true saying.
Full often wished he that the wind might rage.
Lucky is he who has been educated to bear his fate.
It is I whom you see.
The study of history is a study that demands a well-trained memory.
Beyond the city limits the trains run more rapidly than they do here.
Alas! I can travel no more.
A lamp that smokes is a torture to one who wants to study.
Exercise 2

(1) Write a list of six examples of every part of speech.

(2) Write eight sentences, each containing an attribute complement. Use adjectives, nouns, and pronouns.

(3) Write eight sentences, each containing an object complement.

(4) Write five sentences, in each using some form of the verb to be, followed by an adverbial modifier.

Good Phrases For Creative Writing - 7

Some phrases that can use in composition writing to describe FIRE:

1) Flames swept over them.

2) After awhile, a loud explosion rocked the building.

3) The scene was chaotic.

4) Smoke and sparks were whirling in all direction.

5) Many corpses were charred beyond recognition.

6) Horrible scream filled the air.

By School Composition Singapore Primary 4 - 2009

Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Why I Post My School Composition

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Good Phrases For Composition Writing - 6

Some phrases that can use in creative writing to describe HAPPY:

1) She laughed heartily.

2) He burst into fits of laughter.

3) He was all smiles when he saw his PSLE results.

4) They were saturated with happiness.

5) The winner jumped for joy.

6) His bother laughed till his sides hurt.

By School Composition Singapore Primary 4 - 2009

Monday, October 5, 2009

Useful Creative Writing Words or Catchy Phrases 5

Some phrases that can use in creative writing to describe SADNESS:

1) A tingle of sorrow over me.

2) She howled dismally when his cat died.

3) I could not believe my ears when I was told that I had failed my driving test.

4) His brother is down hearted because he failed his O level exam again.

5) Johnny cried bitterly when his bird flow away.


By School Composition Singapore Primary 4 - 2009

Sunday, October 4, 2009

Useful Creative Writing Words or Catchy Phrases 4

Some phrases that can use in creative writing to describe FEAR:

1) The place give me a creeps.

2) She was pale with fear when her police questioning her.

3) He was cold with fear when he walked in the dark alone.

4) I jumped with a start when I heard the noise.

5) He collapsed to the floor out of fear and exhaustion.


By School Composition Singapore Primary 4 - 2009

Thursday, October 1, 2009

Useful Composition Writing Words or Catchy Phrases 3

Some phrases that can use in composition writing to describe robbery:

1) They held up the boss and 2 staff members at gunpoint.

2) The victims were too frightened to utter a word.

3) A group of police blocked the road.

4) The robbers jump over to the next block.

5) We sensed something were amiss.



By School Writing Composition Primary 4 - 2009

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